Sunday, July 27, 2014

My Little Pony - Friendship Is Magic: Episode 407 - Bats!


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Holy shit!  There are bats in the west orchard!  I mean, holy shit, Merriwether Williams actually watched some other episodes of the series!  For some reason, Meghan McCarthy was “mistakenly” credited as the writer early on, but I’m not entirely certain she didn’t have something of a hand in this given the allusions and more “that was easy” plot solutions.  But nobody does lightweight or fitting into her timeslot better than Williams, even if Bats! is another episode that feels like it was written for years past.  This perspective Williams apparently now has is honestly extremely helpful, as it makes for a number of charming moments and produces a watchable episode.  Of course, Bats! is also more filler with little plot and nothing much of consequence that happens.  For the second straight episode, Williams actually shows decent characterization and writes a story that almost takes place in the actual universe it’s supposed to.  But then again, bats, ladies and gentleman, bats.  Vampire bats are a huge problem affecting the farming community, or something.  Williams actually seems determined to counteract the racism present in her previous episodes by having Fluttershy understand that the vampire bats’ culture is just different and not worthy of extermination over.  If only the same understanding was shown to dragons.  Unfortunately, the bat problem takes up the entire show, which makes it apparent that Bats! is nothing more than a low budget bottle episode.

Even though the bats are later shown discarding the outer apple and spitting out the seeds, apparently they also sort of suck the apples dry while they’re still on the tree off screen.  So when apple-bucking season magically hits again, the apples fall in a mushy mess instead of plumply into a basket.  Applejack hasn’t seen the problem before, but Granny Smith told her about the one time it happened many years ago, and it sounded really scary.  Also, Granny Smith isn’t around for budget reasons, and Applejack’s horrifically steroid-infused, I mean tender love and cared for giant apple that is practically killing its tree is in danger of being lost and costing Applejack an easy win at the fair.  Needing help to get rid of this parasprite bat infestation, Applejack calls on the rest of her friends, who are all totally interested in helping out.

Except for Fluttershy though, who surprisingly describes that the bats are just trying to feed themselves and their families.  We only see them looking like fat lazy slobs as they hastily consume the apples and spit out the seeds wherever, but I’m sure they’re totally feeding their baby bats off screen also.  With too many apples to patrol, the plan is having Fluttershy use the stare on the bats while Twilight casts a spell on them to curb their desire.  Fluttershy doesn’t want to go along with this, but eventually acquiesces.  We’ll soon see why she wanted to pass on participating.

The plan itself goes off pretty well though.  Rainbow Dash and company round up the bats more easily than a certain other pest, and they’re quickly captivated by the stare.  Twilight casts her spell, and the bats no longer want to even look at an apple afterward.  Problem solved, the end!

Not quite of course, which would have been obvious by glancing at the clock.  Take two of apple-bucking season starts off exactly like the first, which shouldn’t be possible since the bats still don’t want to touch the apples.  Since this is a bottle episode, there’s really only one possible culprit, and it’s given away when she gets a strange cigarette apple craving shortly after the mane six’s stakeout at night begins.  Somehow the spell backfired a bit and transferred the desire for apples onto Fluttershy, but she doesn’t stop there.

Besides the cravings, Fluttershy actually turns into a full-fledged bat herself.  As the fastest flier in Equestria, the rest of the mane six have no ability to catch her, and she won’t respond to her name either.  Unfortunately, as a large part of the previous plan, there’s no way to replicate it in order to cast a reverse spell on Fluttershy.  But that would take thinking and time, and the episode is almost over.  So the mane six use the same plan anyways.  They lure Fluttershy with the giant apple and force her to look at her own reflection.  She isn’t giving herself the stare, but close enough I guess.  Positively horrified by her appearance or something, Fluttershy is frozen long enough for Twilight to cast the spell and return her to normal.  They set up (another?) orchard for the vampire bats (who apparently like apples again), and Applejack admits she should have followed Fluttershy’s long-term plan at first.  Because crippling your business and only means of income today will totally help in the future, or whatever.

Bats! would have made sense as the season’s Halloween episode (and perhaps this was the intention), so why it was aired shortly after Christmas is another in a long line of poor scheduling decisions.  Not that it carried the weight of Luna Eclipsed, but Bats!’ irreverence fits the tradition of that holiday.  I also must admit that Williams is improving as a writer for the series, but there’s still too much spotty dialogue (“that’s not Fluttershy, that’s Flutterbat!!!”) to say the episode is well-written.  And again, this is another Williams offering that not only requires you to refrain from thinking, but seems to take place in an alternate universe.  With two arcs going on, are we really supposed to care about some stupid bats?  They’ve never been mentioned before, probably aren’t a top concern of farmers, and these specific bats don’t actually exist.  Perhaps the episode could work as some sort of PSA, but that’s compromised by the fiction.  At least there’s some concern shown regarding how the bats (and presumably insects or other animals) aren’t unfeeling evil creatures but actually doing what they have to for survival.  Of course, these specific bats are then only shown in Fluttershy’s imagination and never elsewhere on screen.  The actual bats are just caricatures who don’t deserve the concessions Applejack makes at the end.

Even if Bats! is better than what we’ve seen from Williams in a while, it’s obvious she’s still writing Spongebob episodes.  No thought is supposed to be put into this sudden problem of non-existent bats, or the absurd story of how Fluttershy became a bat because the spell bounced off the bats somehow.  Perhaps this latter point could be forgiven if the episode was specifically Halloween themed, but not with all of the other mess around it.  There’s no reason we should care about anything that happens in the show, and Williams’ surprising message of tolerance feels like she was responding to a directive from above to cut out the blatant racism.  That messed up early writing credit therefore seems like it was done out of hope that the episode would be judged unbiased since Williams is derided in the community.  As a writer who is only apparently capable of penning filler episodes and has lost the confidence of her superiors, there doesn’t seem to be much point in keeping Williams on the staff.  Even with the small improvements shown in Bats!, the episode still seems out of place and meant to be forgettable.  For a series that is attempting to push forward in both storytelling and animation, Bats! is a clear step back.

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