Saturday, September 27, 2014

My Little Pony - Friendship Is Magic: Episode 416 - It Ain’t Easy Being Breezies


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Fluttershy already had her special episode with Filli Vanilli, so the actual one chosen for this honor probably wasn’t going to measure up.  Natasha Levinger’s first outing for My Little Pony was the filler-filled dud Pinkie Apple Pie, and unfortunately, that’s the main problem with her second episode as well.  It Ain’t Easy Being Breezies is meant to introduce a new species first mentioned in Three’s A Crowd (and a reboot from earlier MLP incarnations), but there isn’t really much to say once you see them.  They’re dragonfly-sized ponies who speak some version of Swedish, but otherwise are the same as normal ponies.  The main goal for them is to get home, which just takes flying with a breeze across Equestria.  Mostly the problems are evident by how long it takes simple events to happen.  Fluttershy makes sure to explain everything carefully throughout the teaser and first act, and the journey seems pretty much done by the end of it.  But we have 14 minutes to fill, so of course Spike does something stupid to screw up the plan.  With the Pegasi still around, they could just create another breeze and send the wayward Breezies back home.  But no, they’re not ready yet.  Wait until the 20-minute mark at least.  There’s so much stretching that the various emotional points feel manufactured, as it’s really difficult to care about a group of ponies we’ve never seen before.  Nothing new is learned from Fluttershy either, who again breaks out the stare (after getting angry in defense of a hurt friend) and delivers her trademark quiet “yay”.  With no growth found in an episode supposedly devoted to it, “Breezies” marks Levinger’s second consecutive flop.

Delivering plot points through lots of exposition is a tough task, but Fluttershy is game for it.  She starts in the teaser by leading the mane six through an unnecessary cheer (they’re much too loud, of course), and continues her spiel to Mr. Cake once the episode proper begins.  As we saw in Baby Cakes, he’s someone who will believe any story told to him, but at least this time evidence is provided thereafter.  The Breezies finally show up once the commercial break nears, but Spike disturbs a leaf in an attempt to secure a better view.  A group of the Breezies is broken off from the rest, but Fluttershy rescues them gently.

Naturally (as an avid Bergman fan) she can speak their language, although the leader, Seabreeze, is fluent in English.  He desperately wants to get home, but the other Breezies really don’t.  They shack up at Fluttershy’s place, and create excuses for why they have to stay.  Seabreeze finally has enough of this stalling and sets out on his own.  He’s felled by acorns and bees, but Fluttershy is there again to save the day.  She has to yell at the bees, who unsurprisingly don’t respond to kind words, and that prompts her rainbow moment.  Tough love is the only way to save the Breezies, so she returns home and kicks the bums out.

There’s no point in having tons of exposition without plot contrivance too, so Twilight magically knows a spell to turn the mane six into Breezies (needed when the group isn’t enough to fill a breeze, or something).  They all fly to a hole that leads to the Breezies’ dominion.  Seabreeze is reunited with his wife and baby, and the other Breezies are happy to be back.  Fluttershy escapes the closing hole just in time, and another spell returns the mane six to normal.

It Ain’t Easy Being Breezies doesn’t feature a lot in the way of characterization, and what little exists is unimpressive.  Contrary to Filli Vanilli, Fluttershy only acts in established patterns.  We knew nothing about her feelings on performing there, but her love of animals (including the previous Breezies mention), the cheer, and the stare are all copypasted right out of earlier episodes.  She had better realizations in Filli Vanilli, although the eureka moment counts as one of the few decent scenes.  Unfortunately, Fluttershy is the only mane six member to receive anything more than a supporting role.

Likewise, the Breezies only get one developed character themselves.  Seabreeze has the only speaking part, and at least has some motivation for his actions.  His appearance is strangely feminine though, and it feels like the series copped out on a potential new group to include.  Is Seabreeze trans-something?  Nope, he’s just a normal male, and Fluttershy intuits this immediately with no evidence.  They could have met on the previous trip, but the dialogue makes it clear that didn’t happen either.  At least Seabreeze has some personality, although the revelation feels hollow amongst all the filler.  Did he really need a baby at home to justify his actions?  Certainly almost dying in Ponyville would be enough, but it seems a cheap grab at emotion.  Although his desire is explained, why didn’t the other Breezies want to return?  Seabreeze’s attitude suggests they would be going back to either slavery or some other menial labor, but then they were just as happy.  This second part of the thread needed explaining but didn’t get it.  Of course, the real reason they wanted to stay was to lengthen the episode so it didn’t end after two acts.

And that’s what I mean by filler.  Certain characters’ decisions are only based on the current time of the episode rather than their own desires.  For whatever reason, Levinger doesn’t appear capable of writing a complete episode of the series, which is ironic considering the best writers struggle to fit everything they want into the time slot.  One could argue Breezies-sized modicums of progress have been made, with a few specks of good characterization and scenes.  But they are trumped by loads of exposition and filler, which mar the attempts at emotion.  That Breezies is the worst of the “rainbow” episodes is telling, since their importance otherwise produced some of fourth season’s better offerings.  Levinger couldn’t do it though, although some of the fault must also go to Meghan McCarthy or whoever decided to make Breezies Fluttershy’s episode instead of Filli Vanilli.  As it stands, It Ain’t Easy Being Breezies is a misstep and a disappointment.

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